Monday, November 22, 2010

Case study 2 xD

My Second Case study xD 
Look forward to something better than the first xDD 


Artifact 1 (The American Travel Dream Co.)
 Artifact 2 (Map of Railroads)
     This transcontinental railway built during the 1800s was the first in the world. It was first thought of by Abraham Lincoln in 1863, when US was at the urge of falling about. Lincoln wanted to build a railway that runs from the Atlantic to Pacific. It would run 2000 miles long. This is the greatest line ever built and the start of the Wild West. US, brought together and fell apart with this railway.
WEST
     The construction started in the west in Sacramento, California. It was started by 4 Californian shopkeepers. Through this action, Abraham Lincoln's dream was born. The only problem is that the shopkeepers won't get money from the government unless they reach 40 miles. The start would be tough already since the west in an Industrial Desert. A man named Charles Crocker is to be the head of construction. The supply was already a problem. Adding to that, there is the Sierra Nevada that stands 14,000 feet tall. The shopkeepers has one trump card known as Theodore Judah. Judah is the greatest railroad engineer in the US.
     The Sierra Nevada is the main fear of the constructors. Though stricken with fear, Judah wanted to build the railroad over the Sierra Nevada. For that, he's also called Crazy Judah. They also have the toughest construction worker....James Harvey Strawbridge. Though they had some construction workers, once they got the money to get a shovel, they left for the gold mines.
     All hopes seems to be lost. There was almost no more workers left. Then in 1864, thousands of Chinese immigrants arrived in San Francisco. To run away from the famine there. Soon, thousands of Chinese were building the railroad. So during the summer of 1865, the 40 mile mark was finally met and the shopkeepers got millions of dollars from government aid. To reach that mark, took over two years already.
EAST
     The civil war was just over and all the wealth is going to used for the Railway. In 1866 on Nebraska, thousands of soldiers waited at the end of the line to get ready and build the railroad. Grenville Doge is the youngest civil war general and the finest railroad engineer in his generation. He works for the east side. The railroad that builds the fastest will own a huge slice of the US. There is going to be 1,200 acres of land for giveaway!! Within 6 months, the railroad advanced 40 miles to the west already! But there is one difference, they are running the railroad on the plains. This gave birth to the wild west. Jack Casement is also working for the East. Mostly for fending off the people that wants to loot the train. Jack is one of the military man with the most explosive temper. Up to 6 months, they laid out 250 miles of track which is worth 5 million dollars.
WEST
     The shopkeepers are still in the mountains when the East already laid out 250 miles of track. The chemistry guy Judah hired made a new and much stronger bomb for the rocks. Even though the bomb was powerful, many people died or were lost in the cruel mountain of the Sierras. Through three more years, they are still 30 miles away from the summit.
EAST
     By this time, Dodge is already deep in Indian Territory. A train was actually derailed by the Shian Tribe. Engine caused much fire. Dodge was infuriated. Even with just a handful of men, he prepared all of them for battle. Their work was halted. Now, the top priority is the destroy the Indians.
WEST
     They started to meet very frequent avalanches. Over that time, the death toll escalated into an unthinkable number.
EAST
     After the ambush. Seven bodies were recovered. With this, a process began. This process is to lead to one of the bloodiest chapters of US history. One of the most ruthless general in the federal army named William Sherman was hired. That started the Sue and Shian extermination. But the Indians don't have a choice. They were afraid and the railroad is affecting their lifestyles. At this time, the East is already 500 miles away from the starting point. Meaning they are in Wyoming.
WEST
     The trains of the west was developed to have smaller wheels for one purpose only. That purpose was because the railroad on the mountains are not straight. The small wheels allows the train to twist and turn more safely and swiftly. Since there are giant trestles hundreds of feet tall, there is another crazy thing. The train is going to be run under the snow.
EAST
     Dodge is furious. He is pretty close to the mountains now, meaning the rivers will be affected by the rain easily. When the snow melts, rivers became raging rapids. During the fall, there is nothing but rain. Now Dodge is kind of stuck right after he took care of the Indians.
WEST
     They finally got to an area where the land is flat! Plateau, hundreds of miles of plateau. Crazy things happen a lot while they build this. This time, it's a tunnel measuring 1,600 feet right through the granite!! But this is a burden on Chinese laborers. They are now all sleeping and working in cabins made of snow. Finally, the Chinese men can barely take it. The lack of food is getting on their nerves. Strawbridge is on their side. Crockers wanted to starve the Chinese. Finally, Crockers gave in and the Chinese kept on working.
EAST
     Mr. Durant have been robbing from Dodge this whole time. Illegally charging the US government double the amount of what is needed. Keeping the "extra" amount. This means that 20k dollars finds its ways into Durants pockets this whole time. He is even the director! Dodge did not know at first until Charles Adams found out and told Dodge about it. Dodge threatened to quit if Durant doesn't quit. Finally, Durant quits. This was one of the biggest swindles in US history.
WEST
      After five more years, the tunnel's light could finally been seen. The West is free of the mountains.
EAST
     Durant finally agreed to quit.
WEST
     After the two trains are almost together, a point is placed in Utah. that is where the tracks are going to meet. The first train to get there will get a large amount of money. Chinese workers laid 300 miles of track across Nevada in three months.
EAST
     Has a remarkable pace.

FINALLY
     April 30th, 1869
     The west side makes its way into Utah. They have won. They are now six years and 700 miles from the first shovel in Sacramento, California. It was notified that the East was delayed by rain for one day.
     May 10th, 1869
     The two companies finally meets face to face only one track apart. The final track was laid by both Chinese and American workers. This track, took the lives of over 2,000 men.

Reflection
1. Building of a Modern Economy is what I believe takes place here. Why? Because the East and West US was once separated by one thing.......wilderness. Now, thanks to the transcontinental railway. The US seems more, US.
2. I chose this artifact because it's significance is high. Showing the first transcontinental railway in the world AND showing the US getting united under that track. It took me a long time (the drawing). Even longer for the typing. A few hours or so.
3. I gained the understandings and timeline of major events during this creation. This artwork.
4. This artifact does reflect on my best work for one reason, the artwork. My classmate saw this and didn't believe I drew it! Success!!
5. I demand a 5 for this!! Just kidding. A 4.5 would be enough.
    
  
Artifact 3 (Google Earth: Lewis and Clark Expedition) 
Artifact 4 (Gapminder Analysis)
Artifact 5 (Primary Source Evaluation: OPVL)
Death of Billy the Kid, 1881
here is the link
     The primary source I am going to use is the document called the Death of Billy the Kid. This article did not have a creator, so I am showing the republisher called Robert Utley. He republished it on 1954 when it is published on 1882. I believe the publisher would be EyeWitness to History.
     The document existed to tell the story of Billy the Kid. The author created this piece of work to show the story of Billy the Kid, and how smart he was. The format chosen by the author was to show the series of events of the Kid happened. The author wanted us to get the idea of the dates and reasons of his killings. The intended audience seemed to be scholars and yet high schoolers. The author had a story telling tone throughout the article. This document "says" the wits and guts of the Kid. It shows the betrayal of friends. The Kid was betrayed, or else he would have never died there(Last Paragraph). Also friendship. The Kid would have never killed people if John Tunstall never died (2nd Paragraph).
     The author is a great storyteller. Even through his/her writing and not a real reading from the author in person, I can feel the effort placed into the piece of writing. The time period of this piece seems pretty modern. Though the date states a few years ago already, I get the feeling that the story has been revised over and over to fit the style of the modern world. The piece was created with only one intention, to tell a story. The story of Billy the Kid. To tell the story of a boy, stricken with hatred, seeking revenge to the people he hates. This piece of writing shows all this in a pleasant manner. Billy the Kid is still a killer and always will be a killer. Even if he is just avenging for a friend. The particular "side" of this document seems more biased towards the working government. The author favors the government.
      The point of view this document does not tell from is the view of the Kid. The content of the piece can be verified by many other stories of witnesses written by different authors. This story has already been published years ago, meaning it must have been approved by some point. Something is left out of the story. When the Kid disappeared, the author just skips through that whole time when they couldn't find the Kid. I got the feeling that no one was putting in any effort to capture or kill the Kid. The author may have felt that this part was unimportant. When the Kid left his family, I feel that one important thing was left out. What about his other family members? Did no one really try to stop him from leaving??
Reflection:
1. This artifact relates to The Human Mind. Weird isn't it? I found it connecting really well once I saw the word "revenge". Humans want revenge. That is what they seek when bad things dawns on them. The part where the Kid screams "¿Quien es? ¿Quein es?" shows fear. Fear overtakes human minds' calmness easily.
2. I chose this document because it seems interesting. I saw the word Kid and I had a sudden rush of pity through my body. Death and Kid just doesn't fit together. I got interested so I entered. This took me  over an hour to complete. It's really hard for me because I am not the best at OPVL analysis.
3. I learned of a new person with great impact in US history, Billy the Kid.
4. This artifact does not reflect on my best work for sure. Super hard. But I placed effort into it (crosses fingers and hopes I get a good grade). Again, I am not good at OPVL analysis.
5. I hope of getting a 2 at least for trying.
Artifact 6 (Idea Page on Civil War)

This is part of the timeline I wrote down on my notebook during class. It is really little information because I didn't space out my notes really well. I will post the website here as soon as our school website is fixed. Sorry about the delay.

Reflection
1. This one must be Race Relations, the Abolition of Slavery, Segregation, and Anti-Semitism. I believe it is like this because this is the American Civil War. Isn't almost what this whole war is about?
2. I chose the timeline because it is much neater and is not such an eyesore to look at.
3. I learned much about the Civil War and a lot of names. I didn't know so many people became famous thanks to the Civil War.
4. This artifact clearly does not reflect on my best work because it is class notes.
5. I need get like a -1 for this.


Artifact 7 (Google sketch-up. Civil War battleground)
Artifact 8 (Student Choice)
The Stamps collection
This artifact is based on the collection of stamps from my father. (credits to my father)
It is through two stamp collection books of 1994, 1995, and 1999. If you are also a collector of stamps in the US, I am pretty sure that you also have this book of stamps in your collection somewhere.































   The main item I'm going to talk about here is the California Gold Rush. The California Gold rush was first started in January 24, 1848. When a lone man noticed something sparkling in a stream in the foothills of the sierra nevada. That man was James Marshall, a carpenter. He scooped up several gold flakes but didn't noticed that he had just started the largest gold rush in US history.
      Almost after a year, President James K. Polk announced to Congress that there was an abundance of gold in California. The land was recently acquired in treaty that ended the war with Mexico.
      Four years later, thousand of impassioned people came over to California with one dream, to get rich. California's population escalated to about 250,000. Many young man left their jobs to seek for gold. Almost all used simple tools such as "rockers" and "long toms" to separate gold with gravel. The work caused excruciating pain and it was backbreaking. The gold fever caused discouragement.
      The reports of success keeps coming in! In the short time of 1850s to the 60s, thousand more secured their share of the wealth. The population grew with the promise of gold. Later on, when there was no more gold to be found, the population shrank again. the total amount of gold mined by the end of the 50s was $594 million. Although many gained wealth, many more lost their wealth. Even James Marshall ended up in poverty.
Reflection:
1. This artifact best relates to Human Movement and Migration. The topic connects with the California Gold Rush is really obvious. Because workers wanted wealth, so they moved to California. In the passage I wrote, I stated the escalation and shrinking of the population due to the gold.
2. I chose to do the California Gold rush because it had a great impact on many lives of the Americans. This artifact took me a long time to actually come to. The main part was writing and finding stamps in my father's stamp collection. He started collecting in 1991 I believe. He still collects them. The writing is tough, but not too tough. I have the stamp book as a reference and the internet in from of me.
3. I always though the gold rush started in the 1900s. After making this, I finally noticed that it started in 1848. I actually have been to the area where the gold rush happened. Separating gold from gravel, is a long and tedious work.
4. I am sure that this artifact reflects on my best work (only the writing part). I'm actually quite proud of this piece of writing I wrote.
5. I think I should get a 5 on this artifact.
Artifact 9 (Student Choice)
Buffalo Bill
This little artwork was created by me. It is of Buffalo Bill. It's only meant to have the face for a reason....the hair is just way too hard and I am running out of materials. Even though, it took me a long time to create the statue. Enjoy! :)
      This is Buffalo Bill. His full name it William Frederick Cody. He's born in February 26, 1846 in the Iowa Territory, and died in January 10, 1917. He was an American soldier and a bison (bison, also known as American Buffalo) hunter and showman. He's one of the most famous figure of the American Old West. Buffalo Bill actually received the Medal of Honor in 1872.

      The nickname was given to him was after he killed 4,280 American Buffalos in eight months (1867~68). The nickname was actually first held by a guy known as Bill Comstock. Comstock was infuriated and challenged Cody to a shootout match. Cody won.
Cody's mother wished to enlist him as an American Soldier. But he refused due to his age at that time. He worked to deliver supplies to Fort Laramie. In 1863, he enlisted as teamster with the rank of Private in Company H, 7th Kansas Cavalry and served until discharged in 1865.

After that, starting from 1868 until 1872, Cody was employed as a scout by the US Army. He spent part of his time scouting for Indians and the remainder of his time was spent on killing bison for the Kansas Pacific Railroad. On January of 1872, Cody was a scout for the Grand Duke Alexei Alexandrovich of Russia's highly publicized royal hunt.

So why did Cody receive the Medal of Honer?? He received it in 1872 for "gallantry in action" while serving as a civilian scout. It was for the 3rd Cavalry Regiment. But in 1917, the US congress revoked 911 of the medals given out because it was just civilian actions and the standards were raised. But after Dr. Mary Edwards Walker's medals was restored in 1977, Cody had his medal re-instated on June 12, 1989 with four other civilians.

That was a basic outline of the short story of how Buffalo Bill came to be and why he received the Medal of Honor. Thank you for reading this.

Reflection: 
1. This reflects to The Universe Seen through a microscope. For me, this main topic means that we only saw the actions of that particular person in one way and relates it to the Law and the standards. So I related this to the Medal of Honor given to Buffalo Bill and taken away and then restoring it. It was all standards and Laws. Once given, they shouldn't take it back again.
2. I was always really fascinated with Buffalo Bill. What's more? I love these artworks. It's fun and messy. I spent a lot of time trying to create this statue. Although it took a little more than three hours, I am really happy with the result.
3. I learned how Cody's name came to be. I always wondered, "Why is this guy called Buffalo? He's not African American. His real name is not even close to Bill. So why?" Even though I asked that question a lot, I always forget to go search him up when I come into contact with a computer.
4. This artifact reflects perfectly with my best work. It took forever. I am really an art person.....sometimes.
5. 5 all the way!! I loved the process of creating this and hopes to do another one for Case Study number 3.
6. This artifact was really enjoying to do. I really liked it and hoped to make better creations in the future.
Artifact 10 (Student Choice)
A basic Poem I wrote for the "Trail of Tears" 
Indian 
The city we loved with all our hearts,
is burned alive and torn apart.
But our feet keep moving to the land of the west,
with tears of sadness, while hoping for the best.
The white men, strong and violent,
killed many of us, sudden and silent.
We look forward, to a vast praire
our hearts pounded, as our voices shout,
"Here we are."

White
They won't move, those Indians.
Stubborn and violent, those Indians.
Fought against them, those Indians.
Three Seminole Wars, those Indians.
We forced their move, those Indians.
Move to the west, those Indians.

Basically, the Trail of Tears was a move for the Indians knowns as the Cherokees. During the move, 4000 of the 15000 died. It was full of pain. They walk on, heading towards the promised land. Force out of the East where they once inhabited. They walk on in fear of death. They walk on, for the best.

Check out these sites for more info.:
WIKI
Information of North Georgia

Reflection
1. This artifact would bear the main topic of Class Consciousness. It is like this because the migrant Americans believes that they are higher ups than the Native Americans. That is why this artifact fits into Class Consciousness.
2. I chose this artifact for one reason, to share the Trail of Tears through my poems. To let people know what their ancestors have once done to the Native Americans. To let them know that the land they stand on does not rightfully belong to the US. This one only took me thirty minutes for I am quick at writing poems.
3. I read a lot about the Trail of Tears. I didn't know that so many tribes actually inhabited the southern area of the Thirteen Colonies at that time.
4. I seriously do not know if this is my best work. I feel that it's stuck in the middle.
5. I'm getting a 0 on this one.
Artifact 11 (Student Choice) 
To "Rock" a Battle (Battle of Gettysburg)
June 30, 1863


"I shall carry with me to the grave the most grateful recollections of your kind consideration, & your name & fame will always be dear to me. Save in the defense of my native State, I never desire again to draw my sword."
Robert E. Lee to General Winfield Scott,
Resigning his commission with the US Army.



We heard that General Robert Lee seems to be advancing towards this area with soldiers of high spirits. He already won at Chancellorsville in Virginia during the May of 1863. He can't be serious. Though I hope he isn't serious, he is. It came from a lookout based off the Union's main camp. As a rock, I can't really do anything but wait. Wait for someone to kick me to the side, safe from battle range. I see children coming this way. Yes, come this way. Pick me up and bring me to your little games. I must be dreaming, how can they be here to play? They must be here to check on the army. If I die, I will have to leave my fellow rocks. I don't want to become sand. The sand I lay on. Sand.

July 1, 1863
"I can anticipate no greater calamity for the country than the dissolution of the Union. It would be an accumulation of all the evils we complain of, and I am willing to sacrifice everything but honor for its preservation."
Col. Robert E. Lee, U.S.A. in a letter to his son Custis, January 23, 1861


It has started. Everything turned into chaos. I don't see the General anywhere near. I wonder how the northwest and north are doing. I have a bad feeling for them. The low ridge here at the northwest seems to be holding off pretty well. But General Robert Lee isn't here. The main attack must be somewhere else. Suddenly, a heavy foot stepped on me. It hurts so much. It was quickly removed. Seems like other corps of the Union infantry came over to assist the area. I was kicked around as the battle rages and the hurt was rushed off in different areas. I saw my starting position. There, the grass has already gone dry and nothing else was left other than mud. I closed my eyes and hoped that this would be over soon. A sudden blow like a bullet got me by surprise and I blacked out.

As I rose to my senses, I noticed I am now right beside the door to the Union camp. I also noticed it's nighttime. I looked into the tent. There are many beds and groanings of others. What is happening? Then I heard talking. To the closest bed on the right I heard a conversation. Sounds like a damage report. But the soldier saying it was just saying it, no respect in his voice. I guessed it was just to a friend. I heard that the two large Confederate corps assaulted the Union from the northwest and north. It collapsed the hastily developed Union lines, sending the defenders retreating through the streets of town to the hill just to the south. That sums up the whole conversation.

July 2, 1863
"He Lost a War and Won Immortality" Louis Redmond


The second day, both armies fought with renewed hopes as I heard. I wasn't there, and I was glad. I could hear gunshots far away. As long as this area does not get attacked, I am sure that I will be fine. Bam, bam, bam. Guns repeatedly fired. Men screamed in pain as they get hit by a bullet. I know that I am far away from the war, but I still feel afraid. Wanting to run away. Wanting to disappear. Other rocks were talking about all the battles. It was known that the Union line was laid out in a defensive formation that looks like a J (a fishhook in other words, a J due to the rocks' lack of knowledge with the human vocabulary). I heard that Lee launched heavy assault on the Union's left flank. Fighting raged at Little Round Top, the Wheatfield, Devil's Den, and the Peach Orchard. To the right of the Union, demonstrations escalated into full-scale assaults on Culp's Hill and Cemetery hill. I was surprised to hear this many battles going on while the gunshots seems to only be coming from one direction. It's like the blasts are meant to be in complete sync. I was much more surprised to hear that the Unions held their lines despite the number of losses they have suffered. 


July 3, 1863
"A house divided against itself cannot stand. I believe this government cannot endure permanently half slave and half free. I do not expect the Union to be dissolved; I do not expect the house to fall; but I do expect that it will cease to be divided. It will become all the one thing or all the other. Either the opponents of slavery will arrest the further spread of it and place it where the public mind shall rest in the belief that it is in course of ultimate extinction, or its advocates will push it forward until it shall become alike lawful in all the states, old as well as new, north as well as south."
Abraham Lincoln, June 16, 1858, Address to the Republican Convention

Fighting on Culp's Hill seems to never end. The men just marched on us. Hey! We are rocks but we have feelings too!! Every Union fighter ran to the east and south, assisting their comrades. The fight continued. I noticed one thing. The cries became more massive. There seems to be a massive charge from the areas of Cemetery Ridge. I heard that the Confederates just launched 12,500 people into battle at Cemetary Ridge. It's so harsh, you are always so curious about something but you just can't move. For your information, rocks don't have feet. So I just sat there and listened to the news around me. After a long while, cheers were heard. A Union messenger dashed past with a smile on his face. Looks like the battle is over. The Union has won the turning point of the American Civil War.

Reports

Union
Commander:
George G. Meade

Strength:
93,921

Casualties and losses:
23,055
3,155 killed, 14,531 wounded, 5,369 captured/missing


Confederates
Commander:
Robert E. Lee

Strength:
71,699

Casualties and Losses:
23,231
4,708 killed, 12,693 wounded, 5,530 captured/missing

Result:
Union Victory

Reflection:
1. The main topic that this artifact relates to is the Balance of Power I believe. This battle just gives me the feeling that the power greatly shifts after the results. Shifting from the Confederates to the Union.
2. I chose this artifact because it seems to be an important battle during the Civil War because it was a turning point in the war. It took me around three hours to complete this because it's not easy to write from a point of view of a rock, and it's long.
3. I learned a lot about the Battle of Gettysburg.
4. This artifact reflects on my best work. I really like to write these weird stories. I'm just a storyteller that enjoys writing weird things. I enjoyed this one a lot.
5. I should get a 4 for this artifact.

Monday, September 20, 2010

Nathan Humanities


19th Century Humanities

This class is about the humanities during the 1800s. Our goal is to go around the globe during the time of 19th Century. We will look at different countries and weekly questions will be posted here. Of course, this is from the view of a student(me). I will be posting many things here. This is my main profile.

Here is the FACEBOOK profile I created for this purpose.
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Facebook

Starting out
I created this a little into our school already. So I have some catching up to do. The start would seem a little messed up. Later on, when I catch up, I will start posting it week by week or project by project.  

Question of the week 1

 What does it mean to be human?

 Feel free to comment below.
 Please start this comment with:
What does it mean to be human?

My answer:
The most important thing about being human is to be one with strong feelings. Animals may not have really strong feelings towards each other. The power to hate and love. Animals may dislike and like, there does not seem to be hate and love. Animals go with: "Who is the strongest?", "Who makes the best sound?" and all that. They don't seem to fall in love.
Us having hands (especially the thumb) gives us a great advantage to build things. I can't say being smart relates to being human since dolphins have the potential to be smarter than us humans. But they only  have fins, no hands. It allows us to hold things carefully, place things carefully, and do things carefully. Being human means being human and not being human at the same time. Our cells are around 99% nothing. NOTHING!! Does that mean that humans and other animals are just living their lives on the line? Does that mean that we actually barely exists? We are eating, we are drinking, we are socializing. What does it take to make us human!?

Any comments are welcome :)

Vocabulary 
Altruism- puts others first before yourself; unselfishness
Egoism- selfish
Humanities- the study of humans
Empathy- able to put yourself in someone else's shoes
Utopia- a perfect world where most people are said to go there when dead
Shibboleth- any distinctive practice that shows one's social or regional group


Our ways of taking Notes
Our note taking skills comes from something known as cornell notes.
Cue column is where questions and more important items go. Themes, questions, vocabulary, goes there. The Note taking area is pretty self explanatory. It is where you take the main notes. The final area is Summaries. This is where your summaries go. Allowing you to get a quick and basic idea of what the lesson is talking about without looking through all of the notes. One additional item we put on is called Additional notes. It is located under Cue Column and beside Summaries. It is for extra notes later on that goes good with the current lesson. 








Some Notes
Many of our developments causes more questions to arise. Our brain has something known as neurons. Neurons lights up only when our brain sees something from our feelings. It is said that people are meant to be social. We need morality in order to have empathy. Stating that Utopia does not have empathy cause they don't have any morality. Having the power to empathize means being able to socialize. America doesn't exist. Europe doesn't exist. Asia doesn't exist. These are just names we give these areas in order to expand our family. Not only do we expand it through states, we also expand it with religion. Not so longs ago, people on the other side of a range of mountains are all barbarians. Now, we can get anywhere with our current technology. The only unknown areas are space and the ocean. :D
Final Conclusion:
Our world becomes smaller through technology.

Question of the week 2

In what ways do you think life was better in the 1800s? In what ways was it worse?
Feel free to comment below
BEFORE


AFTER

Privacy is a real problem these days. Whatever you share with a friend, even if it is a friend you seemingly can trust, it will always find a way to go out into the public. Nothing is private if you tell someone else about it. With the current technology, anything can spread like wildfire. If the perfect truth does not get out, gossip will get out. Gossip is usually worse than truth. Many things are exaggerated. The technology right now, people can easily stalk you, either from a close range without you noticing or using a really powerful camera. Back during the 19th century, I am pretty sure that there were no technologies that are so powerful. I secret can be kept nicely as long as it is not on the internet or passed through cell phone. The people back then had nothing close to this.
Without a doubt, back in the 1800s,  we don't have to worry about Global Warming. If the technology wasn't that good, there weren't much pollution. Now, pollution is a major issue. Many scientists studies their butts off to find a way to produce "clean" energy. Such as using this so called nuclear fusion to make helium off deuterium and the process would produce a lot of energy that is really "clean.
Medication back in the 1800s is just crazy. How would you like to be expected to die at the age of 40? Not a really pleasant thought. Science right now gave us so much advantage. There is medication for almost everything.

More ABOUTS 
 There will be 9 case studies for this blog. Each case study will consist of 17 artifacts. The first one is about Britain and its Industrial Revolution!! 


ARTIFACT 1 (Primary Source):

Child Labor in Cotton Factories
Here is the link:
Child Labor in Cotton factories

Who created it?
Dr. Marjorie Bloy


Who's the author?
Robert Southey

When was it created?
Extract was written in 1807


When was it published?
April 13, 2010


Where was it published?
online


Who is publishing it?
Marjie Bloy


Is there something important about the author to our evaluation?
This started as a project for her M. Ed. It slowly grown into a resource for people to study British history between 1830 and 1850.


Reflection
1. Human health. This artifact shows how children being inside factories are highly exposed to a lot of pollution emitted by the machines. 
2. This artifact took me about 30 minutes to complete. Due to my slowness of searching up items online. 
3. I learned that many children are getting effected a lot by the poisonous gas emitted by the machines. They are mistreated in the factories. 
4. I believe that this artifact does not reflect on my best work because it has nothing to do with creative writing. As I believe, writing has always been my stronger subject. 
5. I am going to give myself a rating of 0 for this artifact.


ARTIFACT 2 (Idea Page)

Reflection
1. This artifact relates to the Construction of a Modern City: Urbanization. For this page has a lot of information about factories, 
2. This artifact only took five minutes since I already know how to work a scanner. We already took the notes in class. 
3. I learned that punch cards were newly developed only during this time. And that I need to try to use the space of my notebook better. How much information did i fit on this page? Not a lot.
4. I believe that this artifact is closer to my best project because this page is better than many pages within my notebook and a lot neater. But the use of space is not at its best. 
5. I am going to give myself a rating of 4 for this artifact. 


ARTIFACT 3 (Headline News Report)

link to the article


ARTIFACT 4 (Biographical Spotlight)


Florence Nightingale: the Lady with the Lamp
Historical Significance
     She is a common soldier's saviour, te ideological leader of nursing reform, and a pioneering social former besides. Her name is Florence Nightingale, lived from 1820~1910. She is one of the most famous Victorian after Queen Victoria. She belongs to that select band of historical characters who are instantly recognizable: the Lady with the Lamp. Those people ministers the wounded and the dying. She achieved something that most of the women of that time never achieved, so called immortality: she is neither queen, nor courtesan, beauty nor artist.

Early Life
     Florence was born in Florence, in 1820. Her sister had a great idea about the education of women, same as her father. They studied history, mathematics, Italian, classical literature and philosophy. Starting from a really early age, Florence was more academic amongst the two girls. She displayed an extraordinary ability for collecting and analyzing data. It came to be proven really useful to her in her later life. Though Florence obtained the learnings of men, her unable to use her knowledge during that time caused her near "breakdowns". She once had no desire but to die as she wrote in 1850. She quickly rejected marriage at the thought that God had contacted her and that her assistance is needed. She is later destined to go into nursing.
     The whole family was against her idea of nursing. They believe that the occupation of nursing was bad from a person that came from the background of their family. In 1845, her parents refused to let her nurse at the Salisbury Infirmary. Florence managed to spend two periods at the Institute of Protestant Deoconesses at Kaiserwerth in Germany. She later visited hospitals in London, Edinburgh, Dublin and Paris. She talked about details of hospital conditions and nursing methods. in 1853, she finally won her independence and a small income from her father. The is appointed by Superintendant of the Hospital for Invalid Gentlewomen in Harley Street. That is how she became a nurse. 
Reflection
1. This artifact show the Gender roles and the Liberation of Women. Well, only a part of it. This woman is one of the most important woman during that time. She is a woman but she achieved many people's liking during the 19th centuries. 
2. This artifact took me around an hour to complete. For I am not that good at putting some words I find online and changing it into my own words. To tell the truth, trust me, you may find a few phrases copied word for word.  
3. I learned that though the women at that time were not treated well, they still try their best to become the top ones of the time. Many women succeeded and many people respected them even now. 
4. I believe that this artifact is one of my best artifacts for I managed to take out important information only and put it into my own words. 
5. I am going to give myself a rating of 4 for this artifact. 


ARTIFACT 5 (Google Earth Tour)


The following video does not contain audio. Explanation of areas are shown below. . . 


1. Blackpool Tower


  • it opened on May 14, 1894
  • the most famous seaside landmark in england
  • a big tourist attracting in Blackpool, Lancashire

2. Stratford-Upon-Avon

  • the birth place of Shakespeare
  • his birth date is unknown, after a long time of searching, it is said that he is born on April 23, 1564
  • shakespeare’s works are the most performed out of many other writers
  • he wrote about 38 plays, 154 sonnets, two long narrative poems, and several more poems
  • his father is John Shakespeare and the house they live in is where they believed Shakespeare was born
  • baptised on April 26, 1564, and died on April 23, 1616


3. Portsmouth, England

  • full name is Charles John Huffam Dickens
  •  lived from February 7, 1812 to June 9, 1870
  • he was the most popular novelist during the Victorian Era
  • still remains popular up to this day and is responsible for some of English literature's most iconic characters.   
  • One of the most well know and made into many different forms is the book known as A Christmas Carol
  • Know more on ARTIFACT 7



Reflection
1. The Human expression through arts it the best for this artifact. This artifact can only show one thing, the creation of humans during the 19th century. 
2. This artifact took me more than an hour to complete. A lot more. For I didn't know what to do the google earth on. So finding this took me some time. 
3. The most I learned about is the Blackpool Tower. Though constructed in the 1800s, it still bears such beauty even for the current eye. 
4. This artifact reflects on my best work at the moment only, I can surely improve on my google earth skills and I am going to go get my microphone fixed. :P
5. I am going to give myself a rating of 4 for this artifact.

ARTIFACT 6 (Original Student Work)

A Face of the Industrial Revolution

The heat slashed against my face. Sweat rolled down my back as the machines roared an overawing roar. My hand moving with complete sync with my feet, the machine moving with my every move. Speed and skill gives me the money, every penny counts at a time like this. The Industrialization of the 1800s, especially for a women.
We worked day and night, day after day, watching one after another collapsing from overwork. Fear clawed at our hearts, afraid who would be next. The next victim of the pollution from the machines. Nothing seems to be at rest in the factory. The wheels spun as the threads ran through the machine. Pumps pumped, wheels spun, sweat poured out of our heads. The factory filled with dread, no one wanted to work here. We don’t really have a choice. Family shops have closed as we are forced to become cheap laborers in factories. To support our family, this is the only choice we have left. 
“Jane! Get back to work! The boss is inspecting this station today!!” My friend whispered to me in a frantic tone. I looked around, I just noticed that I was dreaming off and the machine is not even working. I frantically struggled to start the machine, just in time for the boss to enter. The boss inspected us one by one, slowly. His piercing stare punctured a hole through me. My hand shook as the boss walked closer to me. I braced myself and shook my head. Sweeping off the fear of getting kicked out, courage grew in me. I sat still, my hands and feet moved in sync. The boss passed me with barely a glance. I felt a wave of relief drown me. 
Just when he is almost out the door, he turned and gave a final glance at everyone. His eyes stopped right at me, I can just feel it. Afraid to look up, I kept working with my eyes closed. I felt the boss’ pass me to the women three sections down. He grabbed her and left. 
I miss working at home. No one pressures us about what we need to do. No punishment would be given out. We would’ve been fine without the development. We could laugh with our children while we work. We can see the faces of our husbands and talk to them. We could eat while we work, slowly, one by one. Now, we are pressured and punished. Speed and skill is everything. Children and husbands are separated from us. The pay is low and the environment is worse. We work in fear, afraid of punishment.
At a place like this, women and men are separated. Even if we work in the same factory, we will never be able to see each other’s faces until our shift is over. We once had a choice to open a family business. We did open a small shop. The demand overflowed and no one could fulfill the demand. Factories started to build up all over the country, before we knew it, family shops were overthrown and working in the factories are the only possible way for us to make money. Even our children, our weak children, have to work. The Industrial Revolution is a step towards modernization and yet a dream killer.


Reflection

1. This artifact best shows Class Consciousness. For I showed how women are not in charge by making the manager male. Which is usually the case during the 1800s. 
2. This artifact was hard, I needed some ideas. The thinking process took a little longer, about 10 minutes. The writing took 20~30 minutes because though the brainstorm is complete, there are still some changes I had to use. 
3. I based this artifact off information I already know from the research and the cotton millionaire game online. I can't say I learned directly from this artifact. I learned indirectly. The cotton millionaire game taught me a lot about what was considered when investing for a factory. I could kinda picture what the workers were working with at that time. 
4. This artifact reflects on my best work, for I believe I am pretty decent on story writing. I'm not really a technology guy. 
5. I am going to give myself a rating of 5 for this artifact.





ARTIFACT 7 (Influential British Artists, Poets, Writers, and Musicians) 

Charles Dickens
      The person I am going to show on this artifact is a man known as Charles Dickens. His full name is Charles John Huffam Dickens. He lived from February 7, 1812 to June 9, 1870. He was the most popular novelist during the Victorian Era. He still remains popular up to this day and is responsible for some of English literature's most iconic characters. His famous works even appeared in magazines in serialised form, a popular format at the time. One of the most well know and made into many different forms is the book known as A Christmas Carol
     The Christmas Carol is made into many forms: children story, TV shows, movies, and even Disney took the idea and applied it to Mickey! Of course, the first novel was published during the Victorian Era in Britain. During the Christmas Tree and all the colorful lights are being firstly introduced, Dickens went against the introduction and wrote a semi-scary story for the christams tales.
     As seen here, Charle's Dicken's A Christmas Carol built one of the biggest impact during the 1800s. This story's source was from the rich and poor people that gave Dickens the idea. One of the biggest sources was his father. His father was imprisoned and they used to have constant conflicts between father and son. That is the character of Scrooge.
     To learn more, GO READ THE BOOK AND DON'T EXPECT ME TO TELL YOU EVERYTHING LOL!!


Reflection
1. This artifact shows the Evolution and issues of Religion and Science. The main point is actually religion. For Charles Dickens seems like he is making fun of Christianity for making Christmas a day that seems a little dark though it is supposed to be thankful. 
2. This artifact took me more than an hour to complete. Just a little bit more. I managed to read all of the information I found and went onto some other websites to make sure that the information I have by my side is real. You can't be completely sure at times. 
3. I finally learned the name that wrote one of my favorite Christmas tales, Charles Dickens. I have heard his name a lot, but never actually knew who he is.
4. This artifact reflects on one of my better works since I am not that good on typing out a small biography. I enjoyed this assignment because it had something to do with one of my favorite tales. 
5. I am going to give myself a rating of 4 for this artifact.
ARTIFACT 8 (Student Choice)

This picture is a picture of the Spinning Jenny. The Spinning Jenny is one of the first machines that gets developed. It threw many home ran stores out of jobs. Machines over men.
Reflection
1. I attempted to represent the Invention, Ingenuity, and Entrepreneurship while showing Class Consciousness. For Invention, Ingenuity, and Entrepreneurship, I used the Spinning Jenny as an example. Showing it's clever inventor and it's speed and usefulness during the industrial revolution of the 1800s. For Class Consciousness, it is always easiest to show it through the eyes of a women. The women having it's back at us shows that she is focused on her work. The shadows gives off an ominous aura to the photo. 
2. This artifact took me about an our to complete. It is not that easy to clearly show the ominous times of the 1800s for many people.
3. Sadly, I haven't learned anything from this. I should have based this on something I had less idea about, that would give me more ideas of research. 
4. This artifact reflects on my better works because it is a pencil sketch. Out of all the art, I would say I am best on pencil sketch. 
5. I am going to give myself a rating of 5 for this artifact.

ARTIFACT 9 (student choice)

ARTIFACT 10 (cause and effect of analytical writing) 

ARTIFACT 11 (primary source and evaluation)

ARTIFACT 12 (idea page)
This is another part of my idea page. 
Reflection
1. This one best shows nothing really other than some of the items we need for class. For I haven't been putting some of my notes together, they are all scattered out in my notebook, so I had a hard time finding this. 
2. This artifact took me a short time to complete, for most of it is already done in class.
3.  I learned best of some of the things the teachers wanted to see. 
4. This artifact reflects on my not that good works. 
5. I am going to give myself a rating of -3 for this artifact.

ARTIFACT 13 (gapminder analysis)

ARTIFACT 14 (research collaboration and video presentation)
On Lee Huang's Blog. His artifact 14. 

ARTIFACT 15 (student created timeline) 
This is the timeline I created. Sorry for the flip and the poor quality. 


Reflection
1. I feel that this artifact shows class consciousness in the end because it shows a lot of different freedom of women and things like that. There are some abolition of slavery inside it. The creation of modern nation states is another big one. You can easily see the developments of the British empire.   
2. This artifact took me about an hour to complete. It took some time to put valid information on, there is so much to choose from!! creating the timeline took me the most time. The ruler is not that long, so I had to draft a lot.
3. I learned a lot from this. Mostly on the dates of happenings. I knew a lot of these information already, but I didn't know the dates.  
4. This artifact reflects on my better works because it is a neat timeline. I like neat. 
5. I am going to give myself a rating of 5 for this artifact.

ARTIFACT 16 (original Prezi) 
Reflection
1. This artifact should be based off the building of a modern economy for this artifact shows many things the British attempted to do to achieve a strong bond with Taiwan. This also shows many industrialization of Kaohsiung. 
2. This artifact took me a lot more than one hour to complete for I am really shaky with Prezi. I need more practice!! 
3. I learned the true nature of Kaohsiung and the items the British left behind. I am now noticing some of the designs that looks a little British in different buildings (especially some older ones). 
4. This artifact reflects on my better works because I took some time on the Prezi. I'm not that good at it.
5. I am going to give myself a rating of 1 for this artifact.


ARTIFACT 17 (comparing and contrasting 2 key figures)